Sunday, 16 October 2011

Draft2








“Tired of the same food”
by
Gilang Andrian














29 Lor 31 Geylang
Singapore, State  ZIP Code
84813510

FAde In:
The usual night
INT, Abandoned House, Night
A lot of rats in the meeting. Ben came in.
RAT LEADER
Listen, folks! We are going to start the meeting!
Rat chattering each other.
RAT LEADER
Ahmm let’s see. Alpha, Romeo, and Ben. The three of you ! Take care of this week’s supplies!
Ben
Oh Gosh.
RAT leader
Any question? If there is none, dismissed!
Rats dismissed. Ben walks out.

EXT, Street, Night
Ben introduces himself.
BEn
We went out everyday to still supplies. This is my first time hunting. Most of us wouldn’t make it alive. Such a dangerous task.
Ben arrives at a house

EXT, Garden, Night
Ben
This house seems good. Lets do it fast.
Ben sneakily enter the yard. Sound of grass.
BEN
Hm? What’s that?
Cat shows up from the bush.
BEN
Catttttttttttttttttt!
Cat grabs Ben’s tail.
CAT
Silent, I need you to help me. If you wish to cooperate with me, I won’t kill you.

BEN
Really? Okay I’ll do anything! Don’t kill me please!
Cat
Okay, help me to get the cheese. A lot of my friends get sick from eating rats.
Cat releases Ben and they enter the house together …

INT , Someone’s house, night
              
Cat
Go , you lead the way.
BEN
I can smell the cheese! This way!
They went to the kitchen.
CAT
Yeeeeeek!, what is that thing?
A group of huge cockroaches surround the dirty kitchen
BEN
Hey, guys, mind to share us some cheese?
Cockroach a
Ah, sure. Hey B! Get out from that cheese!
An even bigger cockroach get out from the cheese.
COCKROACH B
Sup’ yo.
Cat
Yeeek, nevermind. I don’t want to have a diarrhea. Let’s get out, rat.
cockroach c
Aw, too bad. Krkrkrkrkrkrk (laughing)
Rat and Cat went out.

EXT , Street, Night
BEN
Aw, that cockroaches are fast.
cat
I know! Come here earlier tomorrow. We must steal the next cheese before them.
Tomorrow , they meet again at the same place, and they sneak in the house again.
Cat
Haha, now the kitchen is ours!
BEN
Hmm, are you sure?
The cockroaches swarming the kitchen.
Cockroach a
Huh? You again?
CAT
Listen, we need the cheese. I hope you..
A cockroach pop out from the cheese.
Cockroach B
Sup, yo.
The two other cockroaches rolling while laughing.
Rat and cat get out of the kitchen.
Cat
They must live in this house. No matter they are fast.
BEN
Why don’t we wake the owner up to kill them?
CAT
Smart rat.
Then they go upstairs to the bedroom.

INT, Bedroom, night
Cat
Oh my, what a terrible room.
BEN
I go wake them up and lure them to the kitchen !
Rat slip on the owner bed.
OWNER
Gyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, ratttttttttttttt !
Cat
Aw, my ears.
  
Rat ran away being chased by the owner to the kitchen.
Cockroach A
Wow, an epic chase scene.
Cockroach B
Epic.
Cockroach C
Krkrkrkrkr. Stupid fellows.
After escaped from the owner, rat came back to the house. There he meet the cat.
Cat
Forget it, rat.
BEN
Why?! I’m almost died!
Cat
The owner.. own the cockroach. They are his pet. The cockroaches told me back then.
BEN
So gross, I might get a diarrhea by eating that cheese. His food must be really dirty.
Cat
Well, after all. I’m gonna eat weed today.I can die from starvation.
Walking out, the three cockroaches laughed at them loudly from the window.
BEN
Oh my, they are annoying! We need payback!
Cat
Forget about the cheese. Come back tomorrow. We will make their life worse than ever !
[Narrator]
And so the battle between the kitchen cockroaches and the Cat and Rat duo began.

Fade out

The end.
     

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